Feedback from Class and Teacher (Music video)

On the whole, the comments me and my partner received were much better than the first time we showed our music video as it was actually finished. The following are comments we received:

• Most of our class members liked it, especially the club scene with the slow motion effect.
• They liked the ending, although they thought it would good if we had the logo at the end.
• We were told that we needed more close ups of the logo.
• Although it was slow to begin, it picks up pace as it progresses.
• The story was told well.
• It's a pity that people are wearing school uniform in the club scene.
• Include text at the beginning.
• The end isn't very strong.
• Perhaps finish with a shot of the logo or make the logo cascade over the screen
• Church shots need to be cropped.
• Lacks pace, edits not fast enough.
• No noticable close ups of logo.